Addressing the Prompt
6Both views and an opinion are present.
Develop each view with more precise, less predictable support.
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The response addresses both views and states a clear opinion. Ideas are relevant, but some points rely on general statements rather than fully developed examples.
Both views and an opinion are present.
Develop each view with more precise, less predictable support.
A balanced position is stated in the introduction and conclusion.
State the thesis more directly after the overview.
Paragraphing is logical and linking words guide the reader, though some transitions are formulaic.
Clear four-paragraph structure with recognizable progression.
Tighten topic sentences so each paragraph has one central idea.
Vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some repetition of words such as subjects, careers, and universities.
Current level: You use phrases like career-focused depth and workplace-ready communication appropriately.
How to improve: 1. Paraphrase key nouns across the essay. 2. Add one precise collocation per body paragraph.
A mix of simple and complex sentences is used with generally good control; occasional article and article-choice slips appear.
Most sentences are understandable with few errors that impede meaning.
Proofread article use and complex clause endings.
回应了双方观点并给出明确立场。
涵盖双方观点与个人意见。
用更具体的例子支撑每个观点。
段落结构清晰,衔接手段基本有效。
段落推进清楚。
减少模板化连接词。
词汇量足够,但有重复。
能使用与话题相关的词语。
增加同义替换。
句式有一定变化,错误较少。
复杂句基本准确。
注意冠词与从句结尾。
大学科目与未来职业
WRITING TASK 2
Some people believe university students should study only subjects related to their future careers. Others think students should also study subjects outside their main field.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In many countries, university education is expected to prepare young adults for employment as well as for further academic study. Some people argue that students should focus only on subjects directly linked to their future careers, while others believe broader study outside the main field is also valuable. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own view.
Supporters of a narrow curriculum say that employers want graduates with immediately useful skills. For example, engineering firms may prefer candidates who have spent most of their degree on mathematics and technical modules rather than optional literature courses. If students spend too much time on unrelated subjects, they may graduate without the depth needed for specialist roles. In competitive job markets, practical training and workplace-ready communication can matter as much as theoretical knowledge.
However, critics of an overly vocational approach point out that many careers change over time. Students who study history, philosophy, or languages alongside their major may develop stronger critical thinking and adaptability. Universities that encourage interdisciplinary projects can help learners connect ideas across fields, which is useful in areas such as public policy, entrepreneurship, and international business. A graduate who has only studied one narrow track may struggle when job requirements shift.
In my opinion, universities should combine career-focused depth with a limited amount of study outside the main discipline. A balanced model allows specialists to build expertise while still practising broader reasoning skills. For instance, a computer science student might benefit from a module on ethics or communication, but should not be forced to take many unrelated courses that delay technical progress.
In conclusion, although career-related study is important, universities should not ignore wider learning entirely. Teaching both focused professional skills and selected subjects outside the main field will help graduates meet employer needs and adapt to changing workplaces.
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